Friday, July 29, 2011

This is the last week of class and i am feeling good about the final paper i have a good team to work with. :). at the ugl waiting for them to put the final touches to our paper and start the video. I have to admit, I really enjoyed taking this class

Part Three

AUDIENCE ANALYSIS AND DELIVERY

The argument on legalizing prostitution will be geared toward the general public. When we speak of the general public we are speaking in terms of all people. Children, teenagers, parents, business owner, married people, the media and the government are our key audience members when speaking on such profession. Government plays a major role in our audience due to the fact that it is an illegal profession in the state of Michigan. Legalizing prostitution will affect other states and other countries as well. It will also affect business and the working class people in many ways. By legalizing prostitution it will affect people day to day life and others lifestyle. This profession is a big business opportunity for most business professional.

Posting an xtranormal video of the legalization of prostitution will open the eyes of the general public to see that prostitution could benefit the economic crisis that the state of Michigan is facing today. This video will also benefit local business by bring in more business to the state of Michigan posting an YouTube video of our evaluation  and proposal of legalizing prostitution in Michigan will impact all communities in Michigan. The topic itself will negatively be drawn down by the people. However, after hearing our proposal about legalization of prostitution, people are bond to change their minds and their total outlook of this profession. The general public will be greatly turned out due to the outcome of how prostitution could positively have an impact on Michigan and other states.

Monday, July 25, 2011

some ideas

Topics:

v Gas prices
v Texting and driving
v Teaching
v Illegal Drug usage or drug Dealers
v Shopping online vs. direct shopping
v Some kind of technology
v Day care
v Working
v …….

Wednesday, July 20, 2011

i am ready for the final paper i think its going to be very fun!!!! great weekend...school almost out YES

Paper 3 Final Draft

Omime Davis
Eng 1020
7/20/2011
Joe
What is God?


            How did the earth become what it is today? Who created the shy, moon, sun and the stars? Who created the trees, birds and the bees? Most importantly, who created the human being? Over the years, human beings have evolved to become the most intelligent being on the face of the earth. We have created all kind of ways to communicate with each other in a matter of years. We have come so far from where we started from. The real question that remains is where did we start from? Scientist tries to figure it out by using all kinds of scientific notation, information and objects, but there is something that just can’t be explained. To define our existence, most people believe in God. God is defined as a Supreme Being. A Supreme Being is a being that is all powerful, all knowing, and all good. God by definition is the creature of the Universe. I am a stronger believer in God myself but there sometime questions that I need answered. When choosing the topic for this paper, I realized that God could mean a lot of things too many people in different cultures and nothing in others. As I mention early, God is suppose to be all power, all knowing and all good (PKG).  My argument is if God suppose to be all good, the one who love the world that he gave his only begotten son, why do he allows bad things to happen.  Why god does allow apparently pointless suffering for some reason that we can't comprehend?
            Mr. PKG, the creature of the universe suppose to have the ability to know what’s going to happen before it happen and have to book of  our life. Before we do an evil or bad crime, god supposes to already know.  If god already that a guy is going to rap a poor little old lady why would he allow it to happen. Why does he allow poverty?  I don’t understand why if your PKG you would allow natural destroy to happen. Based upon William Rowe in the Problems of evil he said “Other versions of the evidential argument concede that God could have a morally sufficient reason for allowing certain evils to occur to ensure that some greater good is achieved as a consequence of an evil. However, proponents add, God would only allow as much evil or suffering as is absolutely necessary in order to achieve greater goods. But when we look at the world around us, we find prevalent instances of apparently gratuitous evil—pointless evils from which no greater good seems to result.” This really helped me into coming to my conclusion that maybe God is testing us.
            By putting people to the test is what make God powerful. God has the ability to keep people questioning his existence which I find very creative. God have the power to put people in situation where you don’t really understand what happened, what going to happen and why did that even happen. Some people believe that they have good luck, bad luck or no luck at all. This is where God lay. How you ever been I a situation where the math doesn’t add up. In that case most people believe the power of God changes the math so people can believe in his existence.
Sometime I believe there is a reason for evil doings. Have you heard the saying where there is a good there is a bad. Maybe evils can lead to greater goods, for example someone just lost their job but later they got a higher paying position at another jobs. Could that be the reason why god allow evil thing to happen. Most people call that faith. According to Wikipedia, Faith is trust, hope and belief in the goodness, trustworthiness or reliability of a person, concept or entity. Religious faith is a belief in a transcendent reality, a religious teacher, and a set of teachings or a Supreme Being. With faith in God most people think anything is possible.

In the text here is the argument from evil for the nonexistence of God.  However, is almost like a puzzle. If God exists, then God is omnipotent, omniscient, and morally perfect. In the journal of Stanford encyclopedia philosophy it shows the following.
  1. If God is omnipotent, then God has the power to eliminate all evil.
  2. If God is omniscient, then God knows when evil exists.
  3. If God is morally perfect, then God has the desire to eliminate all evil.
  4. Evil exists.
  5. If evil exists and God exists, then either God doesn't have the power to eliminate all evil, or doesn't know when evil exists, or doesn't have the desire to eliminate all evil.
  6. Therefore, God doesn't exist
            I have to disagree. I do believe there is a god but for some reason he is allowing evil things to happen. How can we love and worship God when he allows us to suffer in these ways?  That’s where faith takes it place. This is when I came up with the following.
God gave the human being the ability of free will. Maybe we took advantage of what god has given us and decided to take matters in our own hands which will have made us the creatures of evil right? To have the ability to do as you will you tend to forget where you came from?  On the other hand, maybe good gave us free will to make us his suspire.
1.       God is PKG
2.      God can destroy evil
3.      Human are free willed
4.      Evil is not destroyed
God is not going to destroy evil thing from happening. It is up to us to do good things to keep evil things from happening to us. God is putting human being to the test to see what we are going to do with the free will that we have. We are using god for all the things that we are doing wrong. These issues are very serious and important to our nature.  Only not as we try to defend our belief in God, but also as we live out our lives.
According to definition, God suppose to know all. Most people my say if god knows it all then what it the purpose of going there the motion of life on earth. Speaking from my understanding, if you want an honestly made bed you have to make it yourself. This mean in order to have something good you have to work for. God is not giving any handouts. So life itself is the process that God plans for us to work our way through life.
      Is God good? Yes good is good. The goodness of God comes from life itself. The gift of life is what makes God good. On the other hand, if life is God’s gift than what is death? Most commonly people look at death as a bad thing. So if death is bad and God is PKG then God is not good. That happens to be wrong. God is all good. The decision that people make according to the free will that people make causes death. Life is all about the decision people make day to day which is on the people.
            Here are words from David Hume I am strongly beside him as follows “The key to the resolution of this apparent conflict is to recognize that when we say God is all powerful, we do not imply that He is capable of doing anything imaginable.” True, Scripture states that "with God all things are possible" (Mt. 19:26). But Scripture also states that there are some things God cannot do. For instance, God cannot lie (Tit. 1:2). Neither can He be tempted to sin, nor can He tempt others to sin (James 1:13). In other words, He cannot do anything that is "out of character" for a righteous God. Neither can He do anything that is out of character for a rational being in a rational world. Certainly even God cannot "undo the past," or create a square triangle, or make what is false true. In conclusion God is a part of people everyday lives, weather you recognize it or not. He cannot do what is irrational or absurd. He is PKG and is all good. The last thing to think about is what you believe in. You have the will to do as you please.

Friday, July 8, 2011

I am very happy that I chosen to come to class today. I would have not known that assignment two was due today. However class today is very small and gives us an more individual outlook on the next assignment. Art is everything :)

Overview

This semester I learned have to organize a rhetorical argument. This class helped me become opened mined to over look what something actually is (art). I realized this you must use logic along with pathos and ethos. You must know your audience. you need to keep the audience attention and some why you paper have any meaning to it. This course helped me think about exigencies.  The final project will put everything together.

Technology

Technology is a resource for the human being to more around the earth very affiance. Technology is used to make life easier for the human race. Technology affects the way we communicate, transport around the world and make things easy on time.  The way we communicate has advances due to technology. We can communicate with family and friend across the country with a click of a button (phone or internet). We are now able to move around the world in a matter of hours due to technology. Cars, boats, trains and planes helps use move place to place along with our goods. Before the advancement in technology it would have took a single person month to move around the country. Technology has made it faster for use to transport in a timely matter.